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请你以李华的名义根据上面的提示，给襄樊日报编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这件事的看法，
要包括一下要点：
1.爬山是一项很好的运动。2.信的开头和结尾以为你写好
文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；把握下长难句在文中的分布；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。
Dear editor, Spring is drawing near. Some people think climb the mountain is a good sport. Look, here is some people climbing and enjoying nature belvedere.doing Some peoole is doing what they like to do on the mountain. Like smoking,eating food, they feel do that can make their relax. But some man disposal plastic and other trash ,butts who can give rise to safety concerns of forest. Man civilization the city civilization
