小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have many friends, but one of my best friends is JJ, he is a 18-years-old boy. He has a bright eye, a big nose and a handsome face. He likes playing football, and we often play together. He would not hesitate to help his friends when they are dismayed. His school record is very outstanding, too, and thus he achieves awards several times. From my point of view, a mild character as he, he is a kind person. We all like this boy.