小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；衔接成分偏少。

I have many friends, but one of my best friends is JJ, he is a 18-years-old boy. He has a bright eye, a big nose and a handsome face. He likes playing football, and we often play together. He would not hesitate to help his friends when they are dismayed. His school record is very outstanding, too, and thus he achieves awards several times. From my point of view, as he has a mild character, he is a kind person. We all likes this boy.