Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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according to the chat , now many people spend much money on education . At present ,the poor pay more than the wealth,ni hao ma ,im ok with me ,we should good dood study day day up ,we should not spend much time on computer ,yes ,you are ringt ,we should work hard