2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；作者在句法层面做的很棒；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

With the development of internet, online shopping is increasing popularity. Currently, a great increasing number of people goes shopping online. It reveals that online shopping has become a sense of fashion. It is universally acknowledged that online shopping not only gives us many benefits but it also brings us many troubles. From my own perspective, online shopping is very convenient and the goods on it are also cheaper than the store. Nevertheless, there are quite a few people who pretend to business in order to make a profit by selling the fake goods to guests. As what I say, I conder that we should control ourselves to purchase things and think clearly whether it is what we need or not. Using money more reasonable, we can form a good habit to manage everything.