可适当增加几条从句;文章词汇丰富度较好,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
When other people ask us to give a hand to them, what words should we say? the choose have Yes or no? From my own perspective, we should learn how to say no and couldn't be afraid of saying no. Some people will consider the people who ask help are their friends. Because of it, they afraid of saying no. furthemore, they think if reject to help their friends , they will be blamed. Actually, we will be forgiven if we really have no time to help. In additon, it is very important that we should know that the trouble they have whether they really can no solve by themselves. We should not put up with the bebave that the people who asked just do not want to do by themselves.