可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
When other people ask us to give a hand to them, what words should we say? From my own perspective, we should learn how to say no and couldn't be afraid of saying no. Some people will consider the people who ask help is their friend. Because of it, they afraid of saying no. Furthermore, they think if reject to help their friends, they will be blamed to. Actually, we will be forgiven if we really have no time to help. In addition, it is very important that we should know that the trouble they have ,whether or not they really can no solve by themselves. We should not put up with the behaviour that the people who asked just do not want to do by themselves.