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假设你是某中学的艾运东, 你一直关注和支持在NBA火箭队效力的中国球星姚明。作为姚明的粉丝,你想给他写一封100词左右的英文信,
内容如下:
1.表示崇拜和钦佩(列举理由一二);火箭队 Houston Rockets 季后赛 2009 NBA Playoff
Dear Yao Ming,
I am Ai Yundong from a high school in China. I have always been your loyal fan since you began to play for Houston Rockets.
拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Yao Ming, I am Ai Yundong from a high school in China. I have always been your loyal fan since you began to play for Houston Rockets. I am very admire you because of some reasons.For example your cooperation --harmonious spirit and technique has reach high level. I know Houston Rockets had get into 2009 NBA Playoff and the first game won.I hope your team better and better.Finally I want a piece of signature photo.
