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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1892
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加从句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

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When other people ask us to give a hand to them, what words should we say? From my own perspective, we should learn how to say no and couldn't be afraid of saying no. Quite a few people believe that the people who ask help is their friend. Because of it, they afraid of saying no. Furthermore, they think if reject to help their friends, they will be blamed to. Actually, we will be forgiven if we really have no time to help. In addition, it is very important that we should know that the trouble they have ,whether or not they really can no solve by themselves. We should not put up with the behaviour that the people who asked just do not want to do by themselves.

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