题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;缺少组织,上下文衔接欠流畅。
In society the basic of life is a trust with each other. if no trust,i think we can't live one minute. we need the other people to support food for us,we can't live alone. In china we are shortage of enough trust,we don't believe other stranger and only believe our friends.So we can't work together to finish one thing well.But we can do well everything alone, the reason is that we can't trust each other. Please trust each other and we can Achieve success.