题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中的过程性词汇不足;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
In society the basic of life is a trust with each other. if no trust,I think we can't live one minute. we need the other people to support food for us,we can't live alone. In china we areLack of enough trust,we don't believe other stranger and only believe our friends.So we can't work together to finish one thing well.But we can do well everything alone, the reason is that we can't trust each other. Please trust each other and we can Achieve success.