题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
In society the basic of life is a trust with each other. if no trust,I think we can't live . We need the other people to support food for us,we can't live alone. In china we are lack of trust,we don't believe other stranger and only believe our friends.So we can't work together to finish one thing well.But we can do well everything alone, the reason is that we can't trust each other. Please trust each other and we can achieve success.