题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
从句使用很不错,再接再厉;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
In today's world, the sincerity problem is more and more serious, scammers exist throughout the world, people have been wondering what is the cause of the decline of faith . The crisis of confidence may cause many issues, for example , spark unrest and war, trust is a life-saving straw, which has huge influence on human life, in that way, which is the best way to save trust, we need to start from their own, you should take the initiative to help others to trust others, if every one could it, we will have a integrity society. but, we also need to learn keen vigilance at the same time, not every people have a kind heart,