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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:秋游通知

发布时间:2013-05-22 12:03浏览次数:2294
要求:
Direction: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a Notice according to the following instructions given in Chinese. Remember to write it in no less than 80 words on the Composition/Translation Sheet. 
事由:秋游 
参加者:一年级新生 
活动内容: 
上午:参观植物园并看《人与自然》的展览 
下午:颐和园 
集合时间和地点:l2月27日上午7:00;校大门口 
注意事项: 
1)自带午餐 
2)参加者在本周四前到学生会报名 
Words for reference: 

the botanical garden植物园

【高频词句】 
assemble集合 
enter name报名 
left baggage office行李寄存处 
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是… 
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。 
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。

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作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

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The diversity of languages is obviously diminishing with the acceleration of globalization, integration, surging international exchange and domination of a few universal languages that enjoy the advantageous economy and cultural influence. The fading of minor languages is just the expanding of several prominent languages under the background of cultural assimilation. Due to the carrier of a civilization was naturally designated to a language, the disappearance of a language manifests the end of a special society that featured by the unique sound they make and characters they write and others. Meanwhile, a nationality without its own language and in an attempt to parrot what others say and think is going to be demanding and be disadvantaged at times when negotiating the mother tongue. The inequality will definitely grow around world and creates more hurdles and barriers for the under developed countries. Besides, this world won’t be as interesting as before when there are only a few languages left and being used, both for travelers and students for whom bilingualism or trilingualism can help people become smarter according to scientific findings. In the spirit to remain, even to diversify human race’s culture, we definitely need to help with the vanishing legacy of rich wisdom and experience bottled in languages.

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