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2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:57浏览次数:2858
要求:
题目 盲目的崇拜(题目自拟)
说明 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words
要求
1.describe the photos briefly
2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them
3.give your point of view

字数:200满分:100分

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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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Emerging from this picture is an ironic scene that a doctor ask a man, injuring his one finger, to stay at hospital for one month, and to make his elbow entirely wrapped in gauze, moreover, they claim to be responsible for the patient. Apparently, these treat for the patient is not necessary. It is deeply rooted in the mind of general public that doctor as a angel help the patient in pained. But this public view is still true? Cases against this opinion are abundant and with easy reach. Firstly, it is not surprise to see some patients spend a great quantity money for a cold. It is not rare to notice that a doctor for patient use many drug superfluous. What the hell happened to the doctor? Traditionally, they loss the sense of the morality of career is considered. The real reason, in fact, may be just be diverse: Aren’t the sense of the morality of career swallowed by their greediness? How can we put an end to this problem? I hold the view that we need legislation from department concerned, intervention from medical groups, and supervision from the mass media. Apart from we also need make the doctor have an awareness that they would be unemployment if they don’t follow the principle of doctor.

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