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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6925
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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作者词汇表达丰富灵活,高级词汇使用也较熟练,要注意避免个别拼写错误;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

The advertising is absorbing into our lives,when we watch tv or smartphone, shop,wait for elevate even. Although advertising affect our behaviour all time, but it can't make us the same. The first , everyone have individual comsumption ability. The same advertising may not be accepted by everyone.for example,the release advertising of apple smartphone cought sight of the widely world,but the part of people who couldn't afford it may be buy anther brands. The second, we have own hobbies and living habits. A pizza advertising may be ineffectiveness for the part that they don't love pizza. Otherwise ,the qualities of some products may be not likely credible even thought its advertising may be wonderful.So many intelligent persons aren't distracted easily.We focus on the qualities more than the advertisings . It's certainly the impact coming from advertising can't be underestimate,especially some big brands which lead fashion or monopoly the market. For example, a game could bring a fad that we felt it seems everyone talk about same thing,play same game.And it's widely believe the products advertised may be creditable . In general, the advertising is unlikely possible to make people do the same or look the same ,because we are independent and individual,with different income ,lifestyle and knowledge and so on.

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