英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 留学> 雅思> 真题> 2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6924
要求:

题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Advertising is absorbing into our lives,when we watch TV or smartphone, shop,are waiting for the elevator even. Although advertising affects our behaviour all time, it can't make us the same. Firstly, everyone has individual comsumption ability. The same advertising may not be accepted by everyone.For example,the advertising of APPLE smartphone caught sight of the wide world,but the part of people who couldn't afford it may buy another brand. Secondly, we have individual hobbies and living habits. A pizza advertising may be ineffective for the part that they don't love pizza. Otherwise,the qualities of quiet a few products may not be likely credible even thought its advertising may be wonderful.So many rational people aren't distracted easily.We focus on the qualities more than the advertising.7 It's certainly the impact coming from advertising can't be underestimated,especially that involved with some big brands which lead fashion or monopoly the market. For example, a game could bring a fad that we felt it seems everyone talk about the same thing,play the same game.And it's widely believed the products advertised may be gaining face . In general, the advertising is unlikely to make people do the same,because we are independent and individual,with different income ,lifestyle and knowledge and so on.

会员评论0个评论)
sisihurry
金币:14

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:90.0Jane0853

人气:55发布:2014-05-03

得分:85.5静静的雪儿

人气:56发布:2013-12-23

得分:85.5Roana_delft

人气:61发布:2015-03-06

得分:85.0Demi依辰

人气:36发布:2013-11-14

得分:85.0fangyuzhengxuan

人气:64发布:2014-01-05