高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown is a small town in the south of Zhejiang province named chumen. When I was in childhood, there were so many green trees around the small town. The river of the town was very clear, that you could see the bottom. And you could see many fishes swim happily. The houses in the town were simple and crude, people worked hardly everyday and poor. Now so many years past, the hometown change much. You can see high buildings everywhere, all kinds of vehicles accross the streets, such like cars, buses, trucks, carts。 The industry development is very fast, but the influence of enviroment is bad. The trees are less and the fishes are disappeared. The air is polluted, we can't breath free like past time. The pollution treatment is urgency, we must do the action.