2007年高考英语作文真题(广东卷):谁是你的偶像

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Last week, we made a survey with 2600 students about" Who is your idol".Most of boys like P.E idol maybe the reason is they like PE too,most of girls like movies idol.Parents in they children hearts is important too,girls like they parents more than boys.Surprisely, the greats people in they hearts precent is same.But i like me parents,they give me so much love and care about over the years.