2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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if my foreign friend visit my hometown,i will take her to some places. And i hope her can happy. The frist place is ZIKU park,it is the most beautiful park of my hometown.And it is very large,many managements in it. Many people will chose the park when decide the place to have fun. In my hometown ,the park is mark of hometown. So i want to take my friend to the place. The second place is Anyue，there is harvest lemon.In my country , the place is home of lemon.I can invite her to eat lemon,she must enjoy the teast.Acid and sweet,fresh and smell.I think she will love it.Then we can visit lemon tree park and sing Lemon Tree. welcome to my friend,i will take care of her.Let her happy!