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2015年高考作文优秀范文:中秋节

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:9575
要求:
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
 

用户的作文(系统评分64.5分
评语:

复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中高级词汇使用较丰富,但请注意单词拼写的检查;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Dear editor, I am a high school student called Lihua,deligted to write a letter about"the Mid-Autumn Festival " to your webite. Generlly speaking,the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most significant days in a year.It is a traditional day that peaple will be excited to celebrate this festival together. Here i will describe some concret informations about it.For one thing,it is known to all people that we can have a holiday so as to hold this festival with our families or friends together. For another thing,not only can we enjoy the full moon with people which play an important role in our daylily lives,but also what we can do is having moon cake with them.Last but not least,going on a trip and visiting friends and so on is an extremely satisfing activity. In brief,i would be most greatful if your can select my passage and send me a repiy as soon as possible. Yours, Lihua.

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