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2015年高考作文优秀范文:中秋节

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:9568
要求:
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;
2. 家人团聚;
3. 赏月、吃月饼;
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
 

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

用户练习作文:

Dear editor, I am a high school student called Lihua,delighted to write a letter about"the Mid-Autumn Festival " to your website. Generally speaking,the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most significant days in a year.It is a traditional day that people will be excited to celebrate this festival together. Here I will describe some concret information about it. For one thing,it is known to all people that we can have a holiday so as to hold this festival with our families or friends together. For another matter,not only can we enjoy the full moon with the public which play a crucial role in our daylily lives,but also what we can do is having moon cake with them.Last but not least,going on a trip and visiting friends and so on is an extremely satisfying activity. In brief,I would be most appreciative if you can select my passage and send me a reply as soon as possible. Yours, Lihua.

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