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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较丰富地使用高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。
Nowadays,many universities students take a part-time job. It becomes more and more fashionable in college life. to be frank, part-time have its advantages and disadvantages. As far as I am concerned, its advantages far overweigh the drawbacks. Part-time job is good for our college students. Firstly, it can enrich our school lives. Secondly, it makes us know earn money is hard thus we should cultivate the spirit of hardship. Whatever, it can make us financial independence and share the pressure of our parents. It's disadvantages are it occupies our study time and we have no time to participate some school activities. And then, maybe we are influencethe job and not totally concentrate on our study. For a word, for all it have disadvantages and advantages, it depends on what lives you like and it make influence your daily life
