文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Dear Fred, I am so glad to receiver your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. New let me tell you about it. The first ting I gonna do is go to the museum. There is a new science museum near by my home, and launching in this summer. I heard that there have lots of aircrafts display in this summer. I love aircrafts, so it will be the first thing I want to do in this summer. Then, I will go back to my hometown and watch my grandparents. It has been three years since I go to the middle school, I want to go back to see them and possible spend my most time of summer holiday to be with them. Last, I will go for a tour in Beijing, the capital of China. There are many famous buildings in there, with a long history. That's most attract me. I plan to visit the Great Wall, forbidden city and other scenery spots. I hope I can have a wonderful holiday this summer, and how about you? what are you planning in this summer? Yours David
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