2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达，高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样。

Nowadays,more and more parents who are plannning everything for their children.Most of them think that all they did is good for their children.But in my opinion,children's future should be planned and built by themselves.Parents should be instructors to give suggestions to their children instead of playing a primary role in their children's future. Children are the protagonists in their future life.In order to help children to be indepedent ,parents should make changes.First of all,they should leave enough space for their children to make blueprints of their future.Whar's more,parents should communicate with theirchildren as more as possible,so that they can understand what their children's ideas are.Furthermore,they can give some suggestions to their children when they meet some obstacles. I think future should be planned by ourselves,none of us should put their foot in other's life excessively.