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I think I am healthy.Why do I think so?Because plenty of my classmates are liking eating fast food.But I am never eaet.I do exercise every day.I often have a walk with my friends after dinner.My favouriwte fruit is apple.I eat apple before lunch.I beleve that can far away doctors.I driink eight bottles of water.I like vagetable a lot.It is fresh ansd healthy.
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