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I HAVE SO MANY FERIENDS IN MY LIFE ,BUT ONLY HAVE A GIRL IS MY FAVORITE FRIENDS.BECAUSE HE HELP ME ,HE TOLD ME EVETHING ,SHARE OUR SCERT. SHE IS NAME IS WENJING ,IS BEAUTIFUL AND SMART GIRL.SHE IS AGE SAME ME .WHEN I HIGHT SCHOOL TIME .WE ARE TOGETHER GO TO SCHOOL ,HABG OUT WITH ME .