2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达，高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

With the development of technology and social,many people buy themselves goods by online shopping.It can give us many convinence and adventages.At the same time it give us many disadvantages.I hope wu can use the online shopping greatly.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.