小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中从句的使用的有点少了；作者高级词汇方面要多累积，词汇表达不够丰富；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

My good friend's name is lucy,she is my Primary school student,she has good back hair and two back eyes.we often went shopping and went to cinema togather.but we haven't gone shopping and gone to ciname for a long time ,because I am very busy now.but we keep in touch with her now.