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Nowadays with rapidly growth of advance science and economy, wealth is play an important role in society. For majority of people spend more and more time in chasing money. This phenomenon replaces traditional values. Making friends seems to be more difficult than before. Some people look for somebody who is rich man or famous person's children. All kinds of the opinions are surrounded by wrong values. How to solve this problem? Media always wants to attract audience's attention and give bad influences in public. If we don't take actions to restrain the value like this, we will extend the thought which are full of money and privilege.
