复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文中衔接词丰富;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强。
Lucy is my best friend and she already twenty years old after her birthday. At the age of 10,we met in a party,which is holded by my mom. I remmenber that the party was very funny. What's more, I got my important friendship from that party, so Lucy is very important for me. Anymore, I think Lucy is a nice and beautiful girl in my mind. She always give me some helps when I am in troble,which makes me gratitude to her. I also love her gold hair,which let me think Lucy is a fashion girl.