过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中词汇使用较丰富,但高级词汇使用太少;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
My holiday is wonderful. First of all, I keep learning English for the reason that I never forget my study. Becides, I always help my mom to cleaning our house, which makes me tired but delight at the same time. In the one hand, it not only improve my ability but also get the happiness. The most important is that my holiday make me change myself.