文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Thank you for your inviting. However I must have to prepare for an important examation .So I can't accept your advice that have meals with your parents together. I am sorry about it,and I also hope you can have fun by yourselves.By the way,remember to say hello to your parents,and to bring my best wishes to them.