希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Thank you for your inviting. However I must have to prepare for an important examination .So I can't accept your advice that have meals with your parents together. I am sorry about it,and I also hope you can have fun by yourselves.By the way,remember to say hello to your parents,and to bring my best wishes to them.