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How Should Parent Help Children to Be Independent Nowadays,most of parents spoiled their children and that lead to a result their children become more and more dependent on their parents.In a word, without their parents they can do nothing.As summer draws to a close,many parents are facing the tough task of outfitting a college-bound teen for dorm life for the frist time.How should parents help children to be independent that is what we are disscusing. Why the children so depend on their parents is that they don't get exercise because of the parent's spoil,they have do nothing at home So in my opinion,to make the children get independent.At frist the parents should have faith in the children instead of worrying wheather they could manage.You should trust them in action.Second,in the daily life,the parents should ask the children do some housework such as clean the room and wash dishes or clouthes .Please keep it in mind ,practice makes perfect .what's more ,the parents should ofen encourage their children do their own things by theirselves To be independent is a long period,be patient with you children
