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新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达(2):给大卫的一封信

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:58浏览次数:2959
要求:
根据汉语提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。

   假设你叫陈泉,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到兰州来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
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作者高级词汇使用上还有很大提升空间,但拼写错误稍多;文中从句数量过少;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。

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Passage1   The time is 9 o’clock, and this is Marine Snow with thenews。   The German authorities are sending investigators to discoverthe cause of the plane crash late yesterday on the island of Tiena Reef.The plane, a Bong 737, taking German holiday makers to the island, crashedinto a hill side as it circled while preparing to land. The plane was carrying180 passengers. It’s thought there’re no survivals. Rescue workers were at thescene。   The British industrialist Jaw agreement on working hours andconditions. A spokesman for the management said they had hoped now they couldnow give back to producing cars. And they lost a lot of money and orders overthis dispute。   And finally the weather. After a cold start, most of thecountry should be warm and sunny. But towards late afternoon, rain would spreadfrom Scotland to cover most parts by midnight。   Questions 26 to 29 are based on the passage you have justheard   26. What does the news say about the Bowing 737 plane?   27. What happened to British industrialist James Louis?   28. How did the three-week strike in High town end?   29. What kind of weather would be expected by midnight inmost parts of the country?

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