2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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computer is gaining its importance among us people day by day.it becomes a great part of our livings.we use it to play computer games,to work,to read articles,to chat with our good friends and so on.it seems that is hard to imagine the situration in case of the disappearment of computers.what kind of that lives will be?