2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagram,we can observe distinctly that the employees in different age brackets vary greatly on the employment satisfaction.According to the figures which is provided,folks can see that approximate 40% of the workers over 50 are content with their employment situation.In contrast,nearly 64% of the employees between the age of 41 and 50 are not satisfied with their employment,which is the highest among all three categories. It is no difficult to come up with some possible factors to account for this phenomenon.At the top of the list is employer's much higher expectation of the middle-aged people.It is reported that around 54% of the middle-aged staff have to burn the candle at both ends from time to time.Besides,we must admit that the people between 41 and 50 are not energetic enough to attain their ambition.Finally,what is responsible for the situation is that most of the staff in their forties cannot see the slightest prospect of promotion. As per above-mentioned,it is no surprise to see the middle aged employees'doscontenment with their jobs.And I firmly believe that this situation will continue in the forthcoming years.