词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,但高级词汇使用贫乏,请重视拼写检查;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Dear classmates, Since hearing that you are bored about english,I would like to share something with you.English is the most popular word in the world.It is the english that we must learn.Not only it play an important role in our examination,but in our life.Learning english is also helpful for other subjects.Therefore,it is important to study english.As to how to learn it,I want to give you some advice. First,remember words.Every scentence is made up words.Only by remembering it in mind,we can write more wonderful scentences.Second,practise frequently as you can as possible.As the saying gose,"practicse make perfect". I hope these advices are useful for you.Wise your marts of English more and more improve.