采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。
My good friend I have a good friend.Is also my best friend.His name is Jerry.I often play with him, he will always stay together with me, our relationship is very good, although just a neighbor, but can be in my brother, he has never to eat delicious, but to share with me. His favorite sport is playing badminton, he and I have the same hobby, about 13 years old or so, he is also very similar in age, he's kind and friendly to others, considerate, respectfully. Is a rare friend, that's why I like him. This is my good friend, more than for personal introduction to him.