采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;从句使用量不足。
My good friend I have a good friend.Is also my best friend.His name is Jerry.I often play with him, he will always stay together with me, our relationship is very good, although just a neighbor, but can be in my brother, he has never to eat delicious, but to share with me. His favorite sport is playing badminton, he and I have the same hobby, about 13 years old or so, he is also very similar in age, he's kind and friendly to others, considerate, respectfully. Is a rare friend, tha