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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10557
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇积累还有很大进步空间;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误。

用户练习作文:

I think dialects should not be used in public places. Dialects are informal languages that are not appropriate for formal occasions.If dialects are used in big occasions,this does not appear to be formal and polite.Dialects are a sort of regional communicative way,so some people can not understand those.this may cause some problems in communicating with each other.

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