作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇积累还有很大进步空间;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误。
I think dialects should not be used in public places. Dialects are informal languages that are not appropriate for formal occasions.If dialects are used in big occasions,this does not appear to be formal and polite.Dialects are a sort of regional communicative way,so some people can not understand those.this may cause some problems in communicating with each other.