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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:54浏览次数:2717
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的。你的看法是?给出具体的原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。

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Everybody has own values, they know what they want and what they need. Participating in sports, for example, the Olympic Games are held every 4 year in different places. Every athlete is prepared for this in 4 years. Every day they have training, they are enjoy the exercise and keep doing their sport. They pursue a better self. They intent to win the game, to achieve their goal and to obtain the gold medal. They are the kind of people who want to challenge themselves. Be higher, be faster, be stronger these are the subject of the Olympic Games. We need to discuss about the term worthwhile. And we need to think what kind of things are worthwhile and which not.

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