2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。

The Mid-autumn festival is one of the traditional festivals of China. The most important thing of that day is that all of remembers of a family will be together to celebrate their festivals. They will appreciate the full moon because the moon in that night is the most beautiful moon. They also enjoy moon cake---a kind of cook looks like the full moon. what's the more, travel and visiting friends are also the important activities in that festival. If you want to know more about the Mid-autumn festival,why don't you come to China on the 15th of August ?