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the advantages of saving money currently quite a few persons hold the point of view that saving money may not make us smart consumers. nevertheless, from my own perspective, saving money does make lots of advantages in our daily life. first of all, saving money does us a favor to manage our owners, which is a good method to lead a better life. since you know how to save money, you'll know how to invest, then gain more. another factor that can't be denied is that saving is a good virtue from generation to generation in China. saving money is also help to develop our Chinese ancient culture. as we all know, it's not easy to earn money especially for our parents, they are not just take obligation to support the daily cost in our family, but also support for their children's education. especially in China, this phenomenon can be seen more frequently in China. what's more, not everything can be bought by money, with the reduction of resource of our earth, we can't use quite a few things from nature. like some valuable animal, people who spend lots of money to eat it without think about the varieties specious in our earth. once lose the balance of ecology, who should take responsability is ourselves. in conclusion, saving money doesn't may not make us smart consumers, conversely, it does make lots of advantages, so why not try saving money from now?
