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作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
The advantages of saving money Currently quite a few individuals hold the point of view that saving money may not make us smart consumers. Nevertheless, from my own perspective, saving money does make lots of advantages in our daily life. First of all, saving money does us a favor to manage our owners, which is a good method to lead a better life. Since you know how to save money, you'll know how to invest, subsequently gain more from original owners. another factor that can't be denied is that saving is a good virtue from generation to generation in China. Therefore, saving money also helps to develop our Chinese ancient culture. It's universally acknowledged that it's not easy to earn money especially for our parents. They are not just take obligation to support the daily cost in the family, but also support for their children's education. especially in China, this phenomenon can be seen more frequently. What's more, not everything can be bought with money, with the reduction of resources on our earth, we can't use quite a few things from nature. Such as some endangered animals, people who spend lots of money eating it without think about the varieties specious in our earth. Once losing the balance of ecology, who should take responsibility is ourselves. In conclusion, saving money doesn't may not make us smart consumers. Conversely, it does make lots of advantages. Thus why not try saving money from now?