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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33564
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分88.0分
评语:

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

The advantages of saving money Currently quite a few individuals hold the point of view that saving money may not make us smart consumers. Nevertheless, from my own perspective, saving money does make lots of advantages in our daily life. First of all, saving money means reasonable consumption that does us a favor to manage our own property effectively, which is a good method to lead a better life. Since you know how to save money, you'll know how to invest, subsequently gain more from original owners. Another factor that can't be denied is that saving is a good virtue from generation to generation in China. Therefore, saving money also helps to develop our Chinese culture. It's universally acknowledged that it's not easy to earn money especially for our parents. They are not just take obligation to support the daily cost in the family, but also support for their children's education. especially in China, this phenomenon can be seen more frequently. What's more, not everything can be purchased with money, with the reduction of resources on our earth, we can't use quite a few affairs from nature. Such as some endangered animals, persons who spend lots of money eating it without thinking about the varieties specious in our earth. Once losing the balance of ecology, who should take responsibility is ourselves. In conclusion, saving money doesn't may not make us smart consumers. Conversely, it does make lots of advantages. Thus why not try saving money from now?

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