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Dear Fred, I am so glad to get your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. I usually play the game in the TV. Because I don’t play the game in computer.I like cook!Do you know , I cook a big dinner today , my parent likes it. Yours, David
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