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2004年专八英语作文真题:Should University Students Go in for Business

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:41浏览次数:3705
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题目 Should University Students Go in for Business?
说明 It was reported in the press some time ago that a few second-and third-year students in a provincial university decided to try their hands at business in order to get prepared for the future. They opened six small shops near their university. Their teachers and classmates had different opinions about this phenomenon. Some thought that the students' business experience would help them adapt better to society after graduation, while others held a negative view, saying that running shops might occupy too much of the students' time and energy which should otherwise be devoted to their academic study. What do you think?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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It is not uncommon that some university students go in for business. This phenomenon has rised public attention. In my opinion university students should not go in for business. What are the possible reasons? To begin with, we should treasure the limited time in schools. In the whole journey of our life, we only spent 20 years in schools. It is a short time for us th accumulate knowledge and it is a value time.

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