请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;简单句偏多了;语言不流畅。
hello!linyan I usually play the game in the TV, because I don’t like play the game in computer.I like cook!Do you know , I cook a big dinner today , my parent likes it. oh, I should eat breakfast.let me take off email, I very glad with you! thank you very much .
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